I felt like the original was overworked. The new version feels fresher and much less labored than the first one. I also prefer the bright background in the new one as opposed to the brown one in the first version. I'm quite pleased with it overall.
I have a title in mind that isn't quite right. I think this piece is called "I Hear Her Voice." But I've also tossed around "Her Voice in My Head" and "Even Though She's Gone." Which title do you like best?
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